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In war-torn Ukraine, an American aid worker watches homes and lives reduced to rubble, until the sudden death of her parents forces her to confront the broken home she fled—marked by her mother’s mental illness and a marriage slowly collapsing on itself.
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The hook is quite effective…
The hook is quite effective to get us into the script but the structure needs more work. Too many flashbacks, some without any heading to help us stay on track. If there's an inciting incident in the first ten pages, it's not immediately obvious. At least another edit is recommended.
Slice of life movies are…
Slice of life movies are hard to write, but when they are successful, they can be enormous. Establishing a character in film has to happen in the first 5-10 pages; otherwise, folks lose attention.