Peter Trivelas was First Runner-up for the 2022 Darron L. Wright Writing Award. His short stories have appeared in Deadly Writer’s Patrol, Blood & Bourbon, Thema Literary Journal, Line of Advance and other publications. In 2021 his fiction was read in a WordTheatre worldwide presentation honoring veterans. He recently completed a first novel and is finalizing a collection of short stories. He worked for years as a television writer/editor and since 2007 has been a full-time Transcendental Meditation instructor at the David Lynch Foundation. Peter is a graduate of the San Francisco Art Institute and longtime member of the UCLA Wordcommandos Creative Writing Workshop for Veterans. He was deployed to Vietnam three times when serving in the US Navy.
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Great...like holding a…
Great...like holding a mirror up to young Male stupidity...all of us in other words!
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In reply to Great...like holding a… by Stewart Carry
Thanks, Stewart. That's exactly it. Wait till you read the rest of the book! It's a coming of age story that never ends.
Nameste
Congratulations and best wishes on your entry for the PTA Book Awards. Smiles//jb
Grass Through Pavement
In reply to Nameste by JB Penrose
Thank you!
I would consider reducing…
I would consider reducing the backstory, in order to give the opening pages more drama and impact.
Raw
Raw and an interesting start