T Patrick OHara I'm a storyteller who didn't really find my writing voice until later in life. My novels are "what if" explorations, always told in first person and present tense, allowing the reader to experience the story as I imagine I would. See profile Award Category Writing Award 2023 Golden Writer An Unexpected Magic My Submission Comments Heartbreaking! Jennifer Rarden Mon, 24/07/2023 - 21:51 This is so heartbreaking, but it's a lovely start! re: Heartbreaking! TP O'Hara Fri, 28/07/2023 - 19:01 In reply to Heartbreaking! by Jennifer Rarden Thank you for your observations. I'm glad you have found the raw emotion I meant to convey and that you found this small sample to be a good start.
Heartbreaking! Jennifer Rarden Mon, 24/07/2023 - 21:51 This is so heartbreaking, but it's a lovely start!
re: Heartbreaking! TP O'Hara Fri, 28/07/2023 - 19:01 In reply to Heartbreaking! by Jennifer Rarden Thank you for your observations. I'm glad you have found the raw emotion I meant to convey and that you found this small sample to be a good start.
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Heartbreaking!
This is so heartbreaking, but it's a lovely start!
re: Heartbreaking!
In reply to Heartbreaking! by Jennifer Rarden
Thank you for your observations. I'm glad you have found the raw emotion I meant to convey and that you found this small sample to be a good start.