Great set up, interesting… Catalina Lowe Sat, 10/09/2022 - 01:38 Great set up, interesting character dynamics merged with good ole English humor.
Some good writing Ginger Liu Sun, 02/10/2022 - 17:51 Watch how you describe women, “gorgeous,” etc. Men aren’t described the same. Some good writing apart from the women.
What world are we in? Veronica McKenzie Sat, 08/10/2022 - 21:09 This felt confusing to me. After a great introduction, the pace drops, and the dialogue and action did not feel cinematic enough.
What world are we in? Veronica McKenzie Sat, 08/10/2022 - 21:09 This felt confusing to me. After a great introduction, the pace drops, and the dialogue and action did not feel cinematic enough.
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Great set up, interesting…
Great set up, interesting character dynamics merged with good ole English humor.
Some good writing
Watch how you describe women, “gorgeous,” etc. Men aren’t described the same. Some good writing apart from the women.
What world are we in?
This felt confusing to me. After a great introduction, the pace drops, and the dialogue and action did not feel cinematic enough.
What world are we in?
This felt confusing to me. After a great introduction, the pace drops, and the dialogue and action did not feel cinematic enough.