When Maiya's mother spends the rent money on a vaginal steam and they're evicted, Maiya has to face her worst fear to give her anxious sister a home - moving into the family crematorium and becoming the meat in the psycho sandwich between her narcissistic, hippie mother and controlling grandmother.
Scatter Planner
Copyright by Tracy_Richardson.
Genre
Award Category
My first 10 pages are attached in pdf format.
Comments
Cosmic Comedy
The opening scene had me instantly hooked into following the travails of our protagonist in her desperate search for a job. It was easy to vouch for our protagonist (we want her to win and find her place in the universe) but it was even easier to keep chuckling along. Great character building.Well done!
Great use of characterization
Good set up and sharp dialogue
Original characters but a…
Original characters, but a bit too random and all over the place.