In a post-apocalyptic world, competing survival instincts create the perfect race against time to save earth from looming extinction. The tides are turned when a stranger shows up to offer an alternate course.
A fast-paced, captivating opening, clear scene descriptions, original and practical writing style. A few typos and formatting errors. Shows great potential.
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Well Written Intriguing, suspenseful...
...Unpredictable. I was instantly hooked from page one and wanted to keep reading to find out what's happening next. Great job!
Great characters
Interesting pov characters.
A fast-paced, captivating…
A fast-paced, captivating opening, clear scene descriptions, original and practical writing style. A few typos and formatting errors. Shows great potential.