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A Noir detective is zapped by Nazis into 21st century San Francisco, where he battles goons, dames and smartphones, to get to the skinny on who killed his partner and how the hell to get back to 1945.
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An effective set-up hooks us…
An effective set-up hooks us into the unfolding narrative but I found Sid's transition to the future a bit sudden and confusing. Perhaps the premise and direction of the narrative could be more clearly established before page 10. Otherwise I think it has a lot of potential.