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You lost a future with the love of your life. But did she leave to save you from your own secret past?
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Comments
The initial pages really…
The initial pages really hooked me. Would love to get a chance to read more.
DARLING GIRL
This is beautifully-written, and I would love to read the rest. Very sensitive characterisation, and the mystery in the background makes me want to read more.
Thank you so much, Annette -…
In reply to DARLING GIRL by Annette Crossland
Thank you so much, Annette - I would love for you to read more too!
While she lay sleeping
Very menacing opening. Gripping.
Thank you so much, Samar - I…
In reply to While she lay sleeping by Samar Hammam
Thank you so much, Samar - I'm really glad you liked it.
Lovely and engaging opening…
Lovely and engaging opening. I could see Lenni's various descriptions of her different environments. There is no superfluous description. Every word is carefully measured and to the point, creating evocative and visual text. Wanted to read more.