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A talented thief buries her old life in a dull, safe one, until mischance forces her to run. Befriended by a bizarre circus, she must battle illusion and reality in two worlds to save her life, and others, whilst being pursued for a stolen fortune in diamonds, and wanted for terrorism and murder.
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Comments
So many great lines in here...!
I loved a bunch, but this might be my favorite.
'I nodded, but I wasn't sure careful was an option.'
Well Done and Good Luck!
Great lines
In reply to So many great lines in here...! by Pamela Meyer
Thank you so much. I love that you loved it! There are so many good writers here, and it's great that one of them likes my work. Thanks again and all the best for the longlist & shortlist.
LOL
I actually did laugh at loud at this line: "Tea? The man should have been wearing a white beard and shouting, ‘HO, HO, HO’." What a great juxtaposition with his raggedy truck!
FLICK-FLACK
Absolutely excellent writing, really compelling. I love the fact that it transcends genres too, it is very immediate and thrilling, look forward to reading the rest to see where it spirals into fantasy...
So very kind of you to say…
In reply to FLICK-FLACK by Annette Crossland
So very kind of you to say so Annette. Thank you.
Flick-Flack
I really liked the beginning of this novel: the writing is original and sharp the narrative intriguing. I'm eager to read on....
I really appreciate your positive comments
In reply to Flick-Flack by Annette Green
Thank you. I hope you will be able to read the rest of my novel, and like it just as much as the beginning!
Clearly delineated…
Clearly delineated individuals and a great sense of tension. I definitely would read on quite happily to see where this is going. Also intrigued that this is classed as fantasy, given that the start has a very 'real' setting.
Thank you so much
In reply to Clearly delineated… by Gale Winskill
I am very happy you like it so far, and thanks for the kind words about my writing. I would love you to read the rest... and follow it into fantasy!