Becky Adams

Becky Adams grew up in a small New England town, the oldest of three daughters. She learned to read in kindergarten and has loved books ever since. Her favorite childhood pastimes were climbing trees and reading books; sometimes reading books in trees.

Becky graduated summa cum laude from the University of Rhode Island in December 1990, earning her Master's degree from Rhode Island College in January 1994. Neither of her degrees had a focus on literature. Nevertheless, Becky dreamed of writing a novel; her home became littered with unfinished manuscripts. Full-time employment, marriage, and children took priority over finishing her works.

In 2017, Becky's 16-year-old son Matthew died from suicide. Shattered by the loss of her precious child, Becky was faced with the task of reinventing her life. Writing her first novel allowed her to cope with the loss of Matt and regain her enjoyment of life. A second novel followed within a year. In 2022, Becky wrote a nonfiction "Companion for Grieving Parents," to share ideas, feelings, and way to cope with the loss of a child. Becky believes that life is long: make the best of it, make it count!

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Comments

Gale Winskill Tue, 22/08/2023 - 17:10

Solid start, but try to reduce the number of adults in the opening pages, as your readers don't want to read about them. Focus on your main protagonists ASAP, so your target readership relates to what's going on.

Paula Sheridan Thu, 31/08/2023 - 18:20

This is a comment from a publisher judge who asked us to post this comment:

A compelling start! We’d love to see refinement around the target age demographic, as well as a focus on the main character right off the bat. I’d also consider story over messaging for readers of this age. Yes, we adults want to give children uplifting messages, but children really just want a fantastic story. Consider it akin to hiding the vegetables in an otherwise sweet smoothie- to extend the metaphor, we found the vegetables here a little too obvious.

Kelly Lydick Fri, 01/09/2023 - 05:18

I love the theme, although I think this MS could do well with a revision. Some of the sentences were a bit choppy, which disrupted the pace for me. I do empathize with the main character, so bringing her through a bit more via the voice of the piece/sentence structure could be a good direction for revision.