Debbie Alty

I have undergraduate degree in English and Creative Writing from Manchester Metropolitan University and a MA in Publishing. Story-telling has been embedded into my life from an early age, listening to my parents tell me stories about their lives prompted my interest in the lives of a diverse range of people. Originally I thought my speciality lied within fiction, but I later discovered non-fiction writing was where I excelled. As a result, when I experienced medical trauma and neglect in 2019 I wrote my dissertation about my encounter and I can proudly say I achieved 80%. It followed themes of time, mortality and identity; it also worked brilliantly as a coping mechanism. Since then I have worked to develop this piece titled 'Four White Walls,' and hope to add a second part that addresses the consequences of medical trauma such as PTSD, which is still ever-present. The point of this piece is to appeal to readers who've had similar experiences and shine a light at the end of tunnel, especially because while I conducted research I only found doctors memoirs. I feel as though patient stories are hugely underrepresented and I could help to bridge the gap. Considering BISAC subject categories, at this stage I would assign BIO008000 (Biography and autography- Medical including patients) and BIO022000 (Biography and autobiography- Women) for 'Four White Walls.'

While I hope to one day publish 'Four White Walls,' I am also pursuing a career in Publishing. Last year I worked with aAH! magazine as part of my MA dissertation to scope and write engaging content, this included writing book reviews and features that focused on matters relating to the theme of 'Freedom.' I believe all the skills and knowledge I have gained the past few years has transformed the way I not only view stories, but also how I write. My style of writing is personal and derives emotion from my own experiences.

I am a very social person and enjoy listening to everyone and anyone! I love hearing about other people's lives, since you should always assume the person you are speaking to knows something you do not. I am confident I have gained valuable skills from my studies and past experiences; I hope to develop these skills (and gain new ones) with guidance from professionals. One of my hobbies is reading, although I enjoy reading many genres, I have a special place in my heart for gothic novels- Rebecca and Dracula being two of my favourite books. I'm also the Digital Content Officer for the Northern committee of The Society of Young Publishers, in my spare time I work on the SYP website and any additional tasks. Another hobby of mine is exercising, for ten years I figure skated and occasionally still take lessons; I love hiking in the Lake District with my family too.

Five months after my appendectomy and I’m back in hospital, but this time for a major operation. My fear of dying has intensified. I don't trust my body anymore. As I come to terms with this life-changing experience, I philosophically analyse myself and those who have impacted my life.
Four White Walls
My Submission

Four White Walls

Since I was about four or five, I’ve had this awful habit of biting the skin around my fingers. To begin with it wasn’t induced by stress and anxiety, but the older I got the more I would nibble at my fingers in stressful situations. And right now, my fingers are red and raw.                 

The doctors are muttering and lingering outside my curtains.

‘Deborah. It’s great to see you.’ Dr Salaman approaches my bed, followed by several trainees. ‘We have some news regarding your CT scan. You will have to go for a major operation and it’s not something we can rush, or perform overnight.’                                                         

My breath becomes shallow. For a moment, I disconnect and I stare at my stomach; cradling it as Dr Salaman speaks.                                                                                                       

‘We’ll most likely take you to theatre on Monday morning. We do have to prepare you for the worst. Do you understand?’ I nod. My throat tightens. ‘We won’t know how bad the infection is inside until we operate. But, I have to inform you of another procedure called a stoma.’                                                                                                                                         I looked around at the other doctors standing around my bed. There’s too many people here. One, two, three, four, five-

‘A stoma is when we have to-’ Dr Salaman spoke of things I didn’t know or understand. I took deep breathes, inhaling through my nose and exhaling out through my mouth.

‘Do you have any questions?’

Inhale. Exhale.

‘How big will my scar be?’

‘Well-’ Dr Salaman uses her small finger to draw an invisible line from my belly button down to my lower abdomen. ‘Usually this is the incision we make. But-’ She drew her finger back up to my belly button, and extended it further above to my lower chest. ‘If necessary the incision will expand the whole length of your stomach.’                                                       

I stare at the line she marked with her finger. What if it’s worse? Dr Salaman adjusts her tone when she sees my expression change.

‘We have to prepare you for the worst.’

‘No, I understand.’                                                                                                                 

She has a sympathetic half smile on her face. I’ve often seen that smile from doctors, family and friends when they don’t know what else to say.

‘Hopefully, we’ll see you on Monday morning.’                                                                  

I nod and the herd of doctors leave through the curtains.

I cling onto my bed sheets, using them as a tissue I wipe my cheeks and dab my nose. I want my mum. I want both my parents to come back off holiday, sit next to me and stroke my hair. I’m a helpless child again. I want my mum to tell me it’s going to be alright. I want to be told I’ll survive this operation like the last one. I want to believe I’ll survive. But, I fear death. I’m scared I won’t wake up. How can I express these feelings? I can’t tell anyone. I don’t know a single person who would understand.                                                                           

I grab my phone and text my mum. “The doctors have been in. They said my fertility may be affected. It could take me two to three months to be back to normal.” I pick at the skin around my fingers. Three minutes later she replies.

‘I can’t even imagine how you’re feeling at this moment love. Xxx’                                    

I’m heartbroken. The fear of returning to hospital after my appendicitis has overtaken my mind ever since. It’s been a waiting game and now, here I am for the third time in five months. I don’t trust my body anymore. I sigh. There’s no view from my window, only another building across the way. I haven’t breathed fresh air in four days.                                                  

I’m drifting in and out of sleep, when they wheel a young woman into the cubicle across from me. It’s obvious she has just come out of surgery. Her eyes struggle to open as she says thank you to the nurses. An oxygen tube rests on her top lip. I try not to stare, but I can’t help it. Looking at this young woman, I feel as though I’m staring at my future self. That’ll be me by the end of tomorrow- too lifeless to speak or move.

My curtains slice open and my sister steps through them.

‘Have the doctors been in yet?’                                                                                            

I sit myself up; my arms shake. I tell her the same thing I told our mum.

‘It’s going to be fine. They’ve finally caught what’s been causing this.’ She takes a deep breath. ‘Mum and dad are flying home tomorrow.’

‘No! They should enjoy their holiday.’ I shake my head. ‘I shouldn’t be getting in the way of it.’

‘You know they’ve not been able to enjoy their holiday since they found out you were back in here.’ She’s right. But the guilt still fills my stomach.

After Aimee leaves, a stoma nurse walks into my cubicle.

‘Hi, Deborah Alty?’

‘Yes.’ She sits on the chair next to my bed. She’s about my height, maybe a bit older than me and a blush pink scarf is wrapped around her head.

‘I’m here to talk to you about having a stoma bag.’


She pulls a small clear bag from her pocket.

‘This is a stoma bag. Sometimes a laparotomy can result in the patient needing one. Your surgeon will make an incision, which will bring your bowels out of your body and into this bag.’ She pauses. ‘So, you won’t be emptying your bowels in the conventional way. But, it’ll all go in here.’ Surprisingly, my eyes are dry. ‘You could just be relaxing on the sofa and you won’t even need to get up.’ Oh great. A dream of mine has always been to take a shit while watching TV. ‘We can get you different coloured bags, like a black one. A black one can be a bit more discreet.’                                                                                                                         I nod, thinking about my social life.

6 AM. The nurse wakes me, lightly tapping on my arm.                                                                   

‘Miss Alty. I’ve got to take your obs. What’s your name and date of birth?’                   

I sit up in a slow, silent motion. ‘Deborah Alty, 1st December 1998.’ This happens every time any staff admit me medication or obs, which is often.                                                          

‘How did you sleep?’ She wraps the band round my arm to take my blood pressure.

‘Not well. I’m worried.’ I spit the words out desperately. I don’t understand why I said it. What type of reassurance could I be offered this close to my surgery?                                      

The nurse stops for a moment, looks at me and carries on. I regretted it immediately.

‘Why would you be worried?’ She scribbles notes onto my papers, glancing up every so often. Where do I start? The scar. A stoma bag. The infection. How many more nights in here?

‘Oh, I don’t know. They told me it’s a major operation. An emergency laparotomy. I’m worried about-’ I pause. ‘If it’s worse than they thought.’

‘I’m afraid that you’ll just have to wait to find out. Dr Salaman is highly praised. I wouldn’t worry too much if I was you.’ She smiles at me and finishes up. As she leaves, she pokes her head back through my curtains. ‘Good luck.’

10:30 AM. Aimee sits to my right, talking about her new house. Occasionally she’ll take her phone out and show me this chair; or that pillow, or this lamp. Her dark hair bounces on her shoulders as she talks, I listen silently and enjoy her excitement. She stops mid-sentence and looks over my shoulder. I turn to look and see an empty bed being wheeled towards my own. My chest becomes hollow.                                                                                                 

‘Miss Alty? We’re ready to take you to theatre.’                                                      

Two men in green uniforms stand at the foot of my bed, waiting for me. I want to grab hold of Aimee and beg her to not let them take me. Reluctantly, I swing my legs over the bed. As I walk over to the empty bed I feel everyone’s eyes on me. When I hug and kiss my sister goodbye I hold on for a moment longer. The men wheel me out the room; as I pass the other women they say, ‘Good luck.’ I watch beds and wards flicker by as they take me downstairs. My body stiffens and remains motionless.

They park my bed in the middle of the room and walk over to the front desk.                               

‘Hi, we’re here with Deborah Alty.’ Looking around, I realise this must be the last stop before surgery. There’s a lot of empty beds in here- at least seven. The bright lights combined with my curiosity to inspect the room, causes me to feel nauseous. I rest my head against the pillow and stare at the ceiling. There’s a brownish water stain. That’s the fourth one. I’ve become an expert at inspecting the ceilings, they’re suddenly much more interesting when I have nothing else to do. Someone should probably tell them they have a few leaks. ‘We’re off now. They’ll come and get you soon. Good luck.’                                               

I don’t watch the men in green uniforms leave. My stomach feels grossly unwell. A concoction of stabbing pains, hunger and worry sloshes inside.

I’m not waiting long before I hear my name. A small blonde, middle-aged woman stands to my left.

‘Hi, Deborah Alty is it? Can you give your date of birth and name?’                        

I nod, smiling slightly. ‘Deborah Alty, 1st December 1998.’                                                            

‘My name is Debby. I’m one of the anaesthetists. We’ll be taking you through to theatre now.’ I’ve never met another Debbie the same age as me. A strand of blonde hair falls from her blue hair net. ‘Deborah? Are you ready?’



She pulls the end of my bed, guiding it through the first door. Theatre one, theatre two, theatre three. I hold my breath. Theatre three. The doors are opened by a man in blue overalls. Breathe. This isn’t theatre yet. It’s very small, too small to have this many people in here.

‘Hello Deborah, my name is Darren. Do you prefer Deborah or Debbie?’

‘Debbie.’ Although I say that, I enjoy the staff calling me Deborah, only my parents call me it so it’s nice to hear it when they’re not around. When I was born, my mum allowed my dad to name me. He suggested Deborah-Anne. My mum liked it and agreed to it, on the one condition that no one ever shortened it to Debbie. But what they didn’t anticipate was as a four-year-old starting school, I wouldn’t be able to pronounce my own name. I always thought it was weird how parents could look at their baby, and name it something old-fashioned like ‘Mary,’ ‘Deborah’ or ‘Helen.’

 ‘We’re about to start admitting the anaesthesia. We’ll be giving you a couple, one of which will be an epidural.’ Then the tears start. ‘What’s wrong?’ It’s the question of all questions, that is bound to set me off. All the nurses stop what they’re doing and gather round me. ‘Hey, you can talk to us. We don’t want you upset.’

‘I’m scared.’                                                                                                                           

Debby holds my hand.

‘Scared of what?’                                                                                                                   

I feel close to death. I am close to it. Partly in the sense I’m terrified of losing my life, but what I rather mean is that it follows me. Sits on my shoulder, hangs over my head like a grey cloud. How do you escape death when it is inevitable? How do you stop thinking about death when it won’t let you rest? These are genuine questions, because I still don’t know. I don’t have the answers. I only pose the questions of irrationality and anxiety.                                 

‘It’s okay. I’m okay.’ I take a moment to control my breathing. On the wall to my right there is a blue fish and octopus; little bubbles hover above them. Children must get so scared and cry for their mum, but are told to look at the fishes on the wall until they fall asleep.                                                                                                                           ‘Are you ready for us to start admitting the anaesthesia?’ I nod. ‘Can you sit up and hunch over? Like a foetus.’ Debby stands in front of me and holds both my hands in hers. In this moment, a thousand emotions overwhelm me. It’s a horrible crumbling feeling. A worthless, embarrassing moment as I sob in a room full of strangers.                                

‘You’ll feel a sharp scratch. This is the epidural.’ A burning pain enrages my back. They lie me back down and hand me an oxygen mask. ‘Can you inhale and exhale, slowly? It won’t be long now.’                                                                                                                                    

I do as they say. Inhale. Exhale. Inhale. Exhale. Inhale.

I hear my name, but I don’t see anything.                                                                            

‘Deborah?’ I’m confused. ‘Deborah?’ I was dreaming. I’ve already forgotten what about. But for a moment, I forgot where I was. I slur words. ‘Deborah, you’re out of surgery and in Critical Care.’ The figure standing by my side is a blurry blob.

‘Stoma.’ I drunkenly stumble over my words.

‘What did you say?’

‘Do I have a stoma?’

‘No, you don’t have a stoma.’ My sight slowly comes through, fuzzy and distorted. ‘Deborah, I have to show you these.’ She lifts up a large bag with yellow liquid in it. ‘You don’t need to worry about getting up for a wee, this is your catheter. And these are your draining bags.’ The nurse holds up two smaller bags with tubes that lead underneath my gown. ‘These bags are to drain excess fluid out and prevent infection. They’re connected by tubes that are embedded in your lower stomach.’ It’s Debby. ‘Deborah, do you see this?’ She holds up a small, neon green button. I nod. She takes my hand and slips the button inside my palm. ‘Here, you keep hold of this and press it every time the green button lights up.’

‘What is it?’

‘Your morphine button.’                                                                                                        

I sigh, relieved.   

I spend most of my time asleep. Nurses leave me a glass of water, but not to drink. I’m not allowed to drink. Instead I dip a tiny sponge on a stick into a glass and suck the water out. Drinking through a sponge isn’t enough to hydrate me- my mouth tastes of chemicals. The room that surrounds me is so clinical. Four white walls. Behind me I hear the beeping from different monitors. I’m connected to these machines by multiple wires. I lay in a tangled chaos, with a dry mouth and an awful headache.


Aimee, her boyfriend; Jake and Hannah walk through the door. As soon as I found out I was going back into surgery I text Hannah. Despite living four hours away in Oxford, she was adamant she would drive to see me. Many people wouldn’t do that. Her brother almost died this year, he was in an induced coma for weeks. I doubt hospitals are easy for her.                       

‘I brought you flowers, but I forgot you aren’t allowed them in hospital.’

‘Han, you didn’t have to get me any.’ Speaking is a bigger task than I thought it would be.                                                                                                                                                            ‘Anyways, they’ll be waiting for you when you’re home.’ I’m overwhelmed by her consideration. ‘You look ginger.’                                                                                                       

I give Hannah a thumbs-up. I’m not even naturally ginger, but that’s what I get for box dying my hair since the age of thirteen.                                                                                             

‘How are you feeling?’ Aimee starts to stroke my hair.                                               

‘In pain. Tired and thirsty.’                                                                                        

Jake picks up a sponge on a stick, dips it in water and passes me it. Embarrassingly, my arms are too weak to take it. Instead, Jake holds it up for me and I slurp out the tiniest amount of water.                                                                                                                                           

‘I want to sleep.’                                                                                                                    

All three of them take a seat and talk quietly.

I don’t remember much of my time in Critical Care, except for when my mum and dad walked through the door. As soon as I see them I break down. The past two times I was in hospital I had my mum and dad there every day, being without them this time has been especially difficult. The guilt I felt about ruining their holiday leaves me as soon as I see them.

‘You’re so tanned.’ I say to my mum. I inherited all of my mum’s genes, except for her dark complexion. My dad however, hasn’t tanned much at all. I struggle to understand the reality that my parents stand before me. I’ve felt so vulnerable without them. They both kiss me on my head. ‘I’ve missed you so much.’

‘We’ve missed you too. We’re just glad you’re okay now.’                                                  

I stare at my parents in awe. I love them. Ever since my appendectomy five months ago, I’ve had a much better relationship with them. I’m not saying I had a poor relationship with them. But when things like this happen it puts life into perspective; I think after spending the past five months in and out of hospital we all realised how precious life is. I look at my dad. A concerned expression shadows his face. My dad is more dramatic than my mum. He always assumes the worst. I can’t blame him though- he’s a funeral director. He sees death every day and knows a hundred different ways a person can die. I know this because, a common tea-time table conversation is usually about who died recently. My dad has met a lot of people through his work. Sometimes when I tell someone my last name in Blackburn they’ll ask, ‘Are you Russell Alty’s daughter?’ Which can be both a conversation starter and a killer, because they clearly know my dad for only one reason. But I’ve got to give my dad credit, it’s not an easy job dealing with death on a daily basis. This wasn’t his first career choice. He used to teach in London, after studying a post-graduate degree at Oxford. My dad prides himself on his intellect.


D. A. Alty Sun, 30/05/2021 - 17:24

I am aware some line breaks and paragraphs aren't structured properly, I tried to correct this but it still uploaded incorrect each time I re-saved it. I apologise for this, however I hope anyone who reads this enjoys it anyway!

Rosemary Hayward Thu, 09/09/2021 - 12:04

If you are using Word the problem might be that you are inserting tabs instead of setting up paragraph styles. Of course it might not be that at all, but that's something I learned after writing a whole novel on Word.

Best of luck

jaidyngroth Sat, 25/09/2021 - 10:40

Congrats on being short-listed as well! Sending celebratory high-fives!

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