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Well-intentioned high schooler Lyra breaks all the rules when she starts tampering with people’s heartstrings, and when they begin going mad after their heartstrings are severed, Lyra is blamed. Left with only the help of a stranger, she must find the culprit before her own heart is unraveled next.
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I love this concept! I admit…
I love this concept! I admit, both of them suddenly dropping all their g's at the end threw me out a bit; you want to be careful not to be heavy-handed with that (especially as Mom's g's were present earlier). This is a great start. The characters are interesting and well-formed, and I love the potential inthis kind of power.
* in this. How cruel to not…
* in this. How cruel to not have an edit button ;)