LOUISA
I am a former journalist, publisher, TV producer and media executive, now writing books (crime fiction) and TV scripts (comedy and drama). I am a Brit, now based in Sydney, Australia.
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Comments
Great start. Edgy and full…
Great start. Edgy and full of promise.
Definitely interesting...
This was definitely an interesting and different read. I'd be interested to see how it could evolve for long running episodic.
Unfortunately, it needs work…
Unfortunately, it needs work. Has formatting errors. Don’t give the same character two or more names unless it is really necessary since it confuses the reader/audience. Confusing, all-over-the-place scenes that are hard to follow and do not demand attention. Hard to tell what the story is about and where it is heading.