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2024 Young Or Golden Writer
Logline or Premise
The true story of a selfish German-Jewish refugee living in London who commits identity theft to become an RAF bomber pilot, is shot down and captured by the Nazis, and must escape before they realize his true identity.
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The promise of the opening…
The promise of the opening doesn't quite live up to expectation. The rapid pace doesn't allow us to get a proper grasp of what's going on and the transitions feel sudden and confusing. Another thorough edit is recommended.