chris berg
Chris Berg and Paul James Smith are award-winning authors who craft crime thrillers inspired by true events. The retired police detectives are former partners and lifelong friends. Their partnership has yielded critical acclaim, including a Claymore Award and recognition as Pageturner Award finalists.
THE NIGHT POLICE, BEYOND THE LINE OF DUTY debuted in 2020, the first of the Night Police series. Currently, BLOOD BROTHERS is on submission and two more manuscripts are in development. More at https://www.nightpolice.com/
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Comments
Excellent build up of…
Excellent build up of tension and suspense.
Love how this is written
It's a great start and just a good read overall.
Good start
This is well written and has the right pace to start building suspense. I like the switch between the scene and the bar, which added to the initial tension.
Good creation of tension and…
Good creation of tension and suspense, as well as strong sense of time and place.
Good pacing
and great images! Nice work.