Jack Williams, struggling with schizophrenia, is admitted to the Smyth Mental Health Centre. His journey of recovery - from despair to hope - is characterized by the friendships that he makes and the 'Controller' that he leaves behind.
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This really pulled me in…
This really pulled me in. Well done.
What comes next?
This opening certainly leaves you wanting to know more. Seeing the two worlds, inside and outside the MC’s head. Great tension. Great sense of place. An appropriately disorienting start!