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After Yone hijacks a train to escape her totalitarian world, she discovers a shocking truth that sets her on a quest to unravel old mysteries, leading to the key to revolution. But Yone must find this key before the villainous matriarch can catch her.
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The pace and drama here really work
There are so many moments to throw us off before pulling us back in. What I like especially is the way the ‘human’ story at the heart of everything feels so relatable. We know this is a fantasy world, some details of which we are yet to learn but the writing helps us trust we will be told when we need to be. We are with Yeon, it is her reality and so it is real to us too. Great first line too. Well done.
Thank you for the kind words!
In reply to The pace and drama here really work by Nikki Vallance
Thank you for the kind words!