Morgan Blanks

I'm a writer who often forgets the reality of my own world because I am lost in a fantasy one. I'm also a mum to a beautiful daughter (under one) who has inspired me unlike any other source of inspiration.

I've been writing ever since I learnt how to pick up a pen. No really, ask my parents.

After moving from Surrey to Bath, I received a Bachelor's degree in Creative Writing at Bath Spa University. Soon after, I packed my bags and headed to the Land Down Under for nearly two years before returning to the UK.

My heart has found its place writing for children and young adults. Nothing excites me more than having a head full of ideas, even if they don't all make it onto the page.

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Award Category
Young Writer Award 2022
Screenplay Award Category
Animation
When a young boy repairs a wrecked boat and sets out to sea, he finds himself on an extraordinary island that is in need of help; but he must choose between staying or finding a way back home.
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Comments

Holly Davis Sun, 19/06/2022 - 02:58

The start to an exciting MG adventure! I think Noah could be written with a bit more of a middle-grade voice- like when we said 'Imminent danger!', it didn't feel like something a kid would say. Overall a great story, just a bit more tweaking on the voice!

Jenni Harrison Wed, 22/06/2022 - 11:48

A great start that takes us to the inciting incident quickly, but with enough introduction to give the reader clear setting and character. I'd agree about Noah's voice - the 'Gosh' didn't ring true for me.

Keith Garton Sun, 17/07/2022 - 09:55

Like the other judges before me, I would agree on the voice, keep Noah's age in mind and the ages of the readers. But Noah and his Father are very likeable and well-described. I think this is a great start to what I hope will be an incredible adventure for middle grade readers. Very good start!

Melissa Hope Mon, 25/07/2022 - 18:26

I loved it! Great opening scene and intriguing follow up. The only situation that raised a red flag for me was the dad's nonchalant reaction to losing his son at the beach, especially after his son has a history of going too far out in the water. As a parent, my immediate thought to losing my kid at a public beach would be that they are either drowning or have been kidnapped. As a reader, I would like to see the father show more concern. Otherwise, this is a great start and I'm excited to see more.