Oceans Away

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This beautifully illustrated book for early years tells the story of little jellyfish bobbing along on the ocean spray, as the ocean creatures join it in a lyrical dance, it becomes clear that all might not be as it seems. A sustainably printed story, gently told to inspire, delight and enjoy.
Children's Picture Book, Graphic Comic Book or Other Illustrated Book

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Stewart Carry Fri, 31/05/2024 - 14:57

Beautiful graphics and layout. My only suggestion would be to experiment more with alliteration and onomatopoeia, possibly a few tweaks to establish a regular and consistent rhyming pattern.