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When a struggling documentarian fails to finish his film about the process of death in Mexican culture, he returns to Los Angeles to gain more funding only to discover he’s been cursed to become the new Grim Reaper.
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Very promising. Gripped my…
Very promising. Gripped my attention from the very beginning.
Dialogue needs...
Dialogue needs tweaking and when read out loud doesn't seem realistic to what would be said on screen. Could use some work. Story could also use a punch up. Good start.