Loren Davis
Retired fire chief. Faculty at Santa Rosa Junior College. Former dolphin trainer and whale scientist. Baja, motocross, and desert racer. Now carving out a new career as a writer.
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Comments
Established the right mood…
Established the right mood from the outset. Great dialogue.
Overall good....
Overall good story and made me really feel the emotion. I liked the ending too.