Andrea

Andrea’s experiences as a nurse, flight attendant, and avid traveler

have provided her with a unique global background from which

she draws her inspiration. It imbues her scripts with a level of

detail and authenticity that have been well received in the industry.

Her first screenplay titled “The Pseudonym” was optioned by

Polaris Pictures.

Andrea recently completed her seventh screenplay, the majority of

which are in the crime/drama genre. Her script A WOMAN DIES

(a.k.a. CLASH) was a Finalist in the Launchpad/Tracking Board

Competition , the Screencraft Fellowship Competition, and a

Semifinalist in the Nicholl Fellowship of Screenwriting

Competition. Her pilot “The Disappearance of Benjamin

Colebanks” was a Semifinalist in the Screencraft Fellowship

Competition.

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Award Category
Screenplay Award 2023
Screenplay Award Sub-Category
TV Series
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Comments

Lauren Cribb Peacock Sat, 26/08/2023 - 01:36

This definitely has some prison break vibes with your own twist to it and the story is appealing, however, I wasn't hooked in from the beginning and there was a lot of lengthy dialogue, I definitely got lost away from the story at times. I would recommend trimming unless its a crucial speech. Show the reader in the meaning of the sentences instead of tell them. Overall, I think it is a good start.