PALINDROME "AN EYE FOR AN EYE"

By Toni Elitharp-… on Sun, 03/03/2024 - 23:14
Screenplay Type
TV Series
Genre
Drama
2024 Young Or Golden Writer
2024 Golden Screenwriter Award
Logline or Premise
A complex story of overlapping cult groups: one, an afterschool meditation group that moves forward from one side; the other, an underground vigilante bible study group that moves forward from the other side; intersecting for a battle of the fittest. PALINDROME; a suspenseful sequence that reads the same backwards as it does forward. Is it good versus good - good versus evil - evil vs good - or evil versus evil? Is it justified? Danger and deadly outcomes; executions, and assassinations; "An Eye for an Eye "– An Indoctrinated Soul Sacrificed for DEADLY PURPOSES. Or is it something else?
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IT TWISTS, IT TURNS, IT'S A DRAMATIC MYSTERY UNTIL THE VERY END! YOU THINK YOU KNOW UNTIL YOU DON'T!

Comments

Stewart Carry Sat, 03/08/2024 - 08:40

From the very outset, the dialogue is full of unnecessary exposition, making it sound more like a commentary on what's happening rather than hooking the reader into what is supposed to be dramatic realism: a world that we can believe in. A complete edit is essential to resolve multiple issues.

Continent
Northern America