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One of Hell's lowly bureaucrats dreams of making the underworld a better place but is confronted by a homicidal fallen angel who mistakes him for Satan.
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Whatever the premise is it's…
Whatever the premise is it's become mired in a very strange composite of concept, character and dialogue, none of which make a lot of sense to the reader. I think it's probably too personal, like a private world that's not very accessible from the outside. A different approach might be a good idea.