By the Horn of the South
CHAPTER 1 - STAR MAP
It is made of fine animal skin and the marks the navigator has laid out
on it have smeared at the centre, the constellations fuzzy, and the ink
blobbed. ‘All I had to do was lift my wrist as I marked them down,’ Dubb
grumbles at himself, as he runs his finger across the document, his nail
cracked and hand bony. ‘Instead, I’ve made a mess.’
On the side of the page, Orion drops down the sky like a shower of
comets and the stars below have melted into dark grey water lines. Even so,
he thinks, a frown gouged above bloodshot eyes, I can recognise them, those
black dots on the skin; I can still see where they’re supposed to be. He licks
his thumb to rub at the corner of the hide and see whether the water line
can be removed. It cannot. His eyes slide to the writing at the top of the
map: “Days since leaving the Strait of Calpe: Season 6, 9th moon, day 12”.
Fortunately, that has not smudged. A heavy sigh pushes through his lips and
his hair puffs about his cheeks. He looks up and along his battered vessel,
The Delphis, then skywards, to the upturned bowl of blue above them. Heat
haze, pale as ducks’ eggs, undulates above the vessel. Low clouds cream the
horizon and judder in the heavy air. An inconsistent breeze pushes them
homewards and what is left of his crew keeps time to Berek’s rowing tune,
thrrrummmm, beat, beat, beat. The oars slice the grey-green tide beneath
them, and an onshore bird swoops low over their foaming wake.
‘You’ll be leaving us soon,’ he murmurs, as his eyes follow it. In the far
back reaches of his mind, his voice adds, If it please you, Mighty Melqart,
if it please you, we’re going home.
As though to pray, he kneels beside the tiller platform and hunches
forward to lay this star map on top of the rest. The records lie one below
the other in a pile, displaying how the stars looked in the sky above The
Delphis at every different stage of their journey since they first set out.
The bottom one, of what might be six seasons ago, is the night they left
the strait behind and Melqart was overhead as usual. He runs his finger
down the edge of the pile and stops at one where the skin juts out. He
raises the rest, heavy on his wrist, and peers at it. This time, Orion is a
quarter of the way across, at the place where Hanno became commander
and things began to go wrong. He flicks fast through the others. There’s a
series of blanks, which are relentless in their emptiness. This is the part of
the journey where the clouds lay thick above all day and all night, where the
night sky vanished and no stars could be seen. This is where the lightning
began. His mind goes heavy with memory and fear. And here, with wet
splodges at the bottom, is where Nyptan…. His thoughts freeze and the
frown on his brow deepens as his heart races off on its own. He flaps a
hand across his face. Stop looking at them, he thinks. Stop dwelling on
it. He pulls his hands away and lets them all slap back into place. With
his teeth clenched and mouth in a straight line, he uses both palms to
smooth the top one down. He puts his thumbs at the bottom of the pile
and starts to shove them all into a large roll. They overlap each other,
curl in like seashells, and he lifts and juggles them under an arm while
his other hand searches for the leather cylinder at his side. These are his
written records, his evidence for his master, Hekataios of Miletus, of his
journey with Hanno, the Carthaginian, beyond the Pillars of Herakles.
He promised he would make records of everything he saw in the sky
above and sea below and, blank as some are, smudged or imperfect the
rest, these are them, his, the navigator’s account of every day that’s passed,
or night sky observed, since the expedition began.
He finds their container and raises it to his nose. It is beaten about in
places with long, thin scratches scored down the sides where it’s caught
the timbers beneath the tiller platform. Even so, the leather container
holds its shape, a strong case for this precious store of goods. Each
time he opens it, he sniffs inside, convinced that, despite all its time
at sea, the smell of the Academy in Miletus lingers in the musty air.
A wave of longing sweeps through him, to pace the familiar docks with
Hekataios, to discuss the seasons, eat Miletian food and drink Miletian wine.
His bottom lands, without warning, on the edge of the tiller platform.
His knees have given way, too weak to hold him up. Yet his mind races
onwards. What if we were sailing through the Pillars right now, the sun
on our starboard, the tuna alongside, ploughing through the familiar
waters of the Great Sea? Heat flushes through his body and infuses his
head. I know these winds, the certain swell, the flights of the birds and
the balm of the hillsides. He puts a hand to his forehead and it comes
back to him drenched in sweat. Oh, it’s the fever again. The shakes start.
His heart sinks and his eyes close in resignation. It’s turning my mind,
making me soft, weak, cowardly. I cannot allow myself to think of home.
Another thing which must just stop.
It takes all the strength he has in his torso to reach for the roll under
his arm and slot it into the cylinder. The records chock into place. He
clamps the lid on top, lifts them over his head by their strap and then
slumps forward, elbows on his knees, head bowed as a donkey’s. I must
be strong. I must not give up hope. The crew needs leadership, Nyptan
needs strength and oh, by the gods, I need to find my courage. I will get us
back to the Great Sea safely. I will hand over my records to Hekataios, my
master. I will do these things or I will die in the trying. His shoulders shake,
his throat longs for water, the day’s heat rises and makes his blood boil.
CHAPTER 2 The Enquiry – Day 1
The sky maps are under the navigator’s arm when The Delphis docks
in Gadir at the entrance to the Great Sea. Months, years, a lifetime,
it seems, have passed. He tries to stand upright, a commander before
his army. Part of the leather cylinder is green with mould; the top
is flattened and it’s lost its shape. It leaves a residue of brown muck
on his calloused hands, where the leather disintegrates, and it feels
slimy to the touch. Many moons have come and gone since he last
opened it. He has had it across his back, slept on it, lent against it,
used it as a head rest, a baton even, yet here it sits, in the crook of his
elbow as Chares, the first mate, throws the hawser across the short
gap of water between The Delphis and the wharf to pull the vessel
in. Dubb’s fuddled brain can scarcely credit what’s happening to
them. We’re nearly home!
He swaps the cylinder to his other arm and drags at the gangway
with his right hand. It doesn’t move, so weak has he become. A mariner,
one of the ones lent to them by the Governor of Lixus to get them
home, gives it a heave. He and the rest of his temporary crewmen
cheer as the gangway goes down. Oars clatter in the rowlocks and
the men spring up, ready to move. The old crew, too ill to stand, let
alone cheer, now begin the struggle to disembark.
Dubb turns to look for Nyptan. She is coming from their quarters
behind the tiller platform, head shielded by a mantle, body stooped. Tanu,
their budding daughter, holds her up on one side and Qart, the ship’s
boy, on the other. His wife’s eyes are hollowed out beneath that cloth, he
knows, and her hands tremble. By the gods! Look kindly on us, Melqart,
he thinks. Save us, get us home. He takes the weight of her body at the
top of the gangway, her on one side, the star maps on the other. They
move at a sea slug’s pace down the wooden frets and, at the bottom, he
stops and turns to look behind. He wants to see every last one of his crew
off the floating wreck, which is his vessel, The Delphis.
The Lixitanians descend smartly. They skip off through the cargo
and loading bays and into the town without a backward look. They’ll be
back off down the coast again to Lixus on the tide, and all the bars and
whorehouses of Gadir are open and waiting.
Next, comes the gang of boys from Libya, the ones they took with
them. At some point in their unforgiving journey, they switched from
supporting the young lordling to supporting Dubb and his crew. Almost
all of them are plagued with fever and one has a hand missing. Shadra,
their unofficial leader, falls to the stones on the quayside to kiss them.
Of this own dear gang, the last to leave because most disabled, there
are very few. Qart, his ship’s boy, the wild-haired, wavy-browed boy, who
is more a son to him than his own, comes off first. He carries Nyptan’s
remedy bag and his own few things wrapped in a cloth. Berek, who lost
his precious aulis at the Horn of the South, and yet made fresh pipes from
reed, comes next. He limps, his ankle the size of a melon, the sticks and
drums he has collected along the way threaten to scatter. Chares, first
mate, laid low with fever, though you’d never know it, has his arms full
too. He carries his own possessions and, slung around his waist, Rabs’s
small bundle. And Rabs - Rabs the expert seaman, Rabs the wit, Rabs who
could always see a funny side even in the worst circumstances - Rabs is a
wraith. Dubb’s belly twists and he bites his lip, the small man’s absence
a yawning hole. He should be here with us, skipping down the gangway
and cracking a joke. Wherever you are, Rabs, we wish you well, Dubb
thinks, and squeezes Nyptan’s arm. Gone to the land of the water spirits
at the Delta? Gone to the women who admired you? Nyptan replies with
a broken sigh. We miss you, Rabs, we all do.
There are other absences too, people Dubb cared for and many he
didn’t: the interpreters, Kama and his friends, left behind in their own
land; the Etruscan diviners - he doesn’t miss them and their persistent
droning; but most of all, he’s glad to be rid of Lord Hanno, the young
Carthaginian prince, who took command of The Delphis as they sailed
to the Horn of the South and then abandoned them to their fate. Well,
good riddance to you, thinks Dubb, and squeezes the star maps under
his arm. You didn’t get these, you self-serving lordling.
The braying voice of an aristocrat from Carthage cuts through the
weight of his exhaustion. It slips around the crates and slithers across the
pallets to pin him to this very spot where, years ago, he heard it for the first
time. Oh no, he thinks. It’s not him, is it? It can’t be, after all these years.
‘Where are they?’ it says. ‘Find them!’
In an instant, the difficulties of the voyage vanish from his mind. Into
their place snaps an image of the most supercilious bureaucrat in all the
Western Sea, the face of Apsan Azrupal Nimiran, the Commissioner
for the Carthage Board of Trade in Gadir. This is a man for whom no
murder is too small, no action too vicious, if it is done in the name of the
wonderful city of Carthage.
Panic floods the pit of the navigator’s stomach. Why is he here? How
does he know we’ve arrived? He’s not coming for us, is he?
Before he can decide what to do next, or even raise an alarm, around
from behind a stack of cargo comes a tall, spindly man with thin, greying
hair and a glossy, young one with jewels in his hair, at their service, a
group of heavily armed guards.
‘That’s them! Take them!’ says his lordship. With a flurry of clanking
weapons and thudding feet, the navigator’s arms are wrenched behind
his back, his ankles manacled.
The strong arms, which drag their wasted bodies across the square
towards the Customs House, are not gentle. Dubb twists and turns, and
is thwacked across the back of his head with something heavy. Chares,
Berek and Nyptan cry out for help as they, too, are detained. They are
hauled, heads shoved towards the ground, across the crowded docks.
Behind him, he hears Apsan’s voice, ‘Impound this vessel.’ In a burst of
violence and speed, all the people Dubb holds dear in his life are yanked,
carried or thrown into custody, dragged down the stairs of a great building,
through heavy doors, into a large undercroft.
Dubb is hurled into soft sand. Nyptan, Tanu and Qart all follow,
skeletal wrecks, piling in heaps against the walls. The door slams shut.
Its clang ricochets off the stone. Weak shafts of light bear down from
the outside, distant cries of the dockside seep in through the skylights
and silence falls.
What is this? thinks Dubb, head pounding. Why this welcome without
the welcome? Why are we being detained? Nyptan’s cries wash round the
chamber and Tanu’s voice murmurs in comfort. He squeezes his arms
to his torso to feel for the star maps. Not there. He lifts his shoulders
up. No, no straps across his back. Not lying beside him on the sand. He
rolls over to search the cellar. With heavy lids, his eyes trail across the
sand. His throat is dry; he cannot swallow and tears fizz behind his lids.
They’ve taken my star maps, he thinks. Ripped from my arms, just as I’m
home. They’ve stolen my most precious record of the voyage. Cold dread
seeps into his bones. All that work I’ve done for Hekataios - the whole
grim story of our voyage with Hanno, the Carthaginian, to the Horn of
the South, gone. Is it really so?
He blinks, his eyelids a means of resetting what he sees in the world.
His head expands to rival the sun and his tongue feels huge for want of
water. He crawls on his elbows towards Nyptan at the cellar wall, puts
a hand out to her. His head drops heavily against the stones. They cool
him and his arm remains crooked, as though the star cylinder remains
nestled in it, as he falls into oblivion.
Comments
Wonderful descriptive detail…
Wonderful descriptive detail in the set-up. Perhaps the continuing narrative in Chapter Two could be broken up with selective dialogue to bring the characters to life.