A Day Like No Other

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A loving grandmother spends what seems like a magical day with her grandson in South Los Angeles—until the true nature of her journey is finally revealed.
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1

Brenda woke up before the alarm. She always did.

The house made its small morning noises around her—the refrigerator humming, a car passing out front, water running in the bathroom where Brian was brushing his teeth too hard. She listened and smiled at the ceiling. The alarm chirped anyway. She reached over and turned it off. She couldn’t recall the last time she hit the snooze button. She lay there a moment longer, enjoying the quiet before the day decided what it wanted to be. Her joints spoke before she did — a quiet catalog of years in her knees, a careful turning of her neck. Morning always arrived first in her body, then in the world.

From the bathroom Brian called, “You up?”

“I been up,” she answered.

“You always up.”

“You always late.”

He laughed, short and familiar. By the time she reached the kitchen, he was already pouring coffee like it mattered.

“Morning, beautiful,” he said.

“How you know it’s me?”

“Because angels stomp when they walk.”

She kissed the back of his neck. The kitchen smelled like toast and strong coffee. It was the smell of their life together — years of mornings layered one upon another, arguments dissolved over breakfast, laughter carried in steam from the cups. Brian liked his coffee serious. Brenda liked hers friendly. He slid a mug toward her.

“Eggs?”

“Just one.”

“Stomach acting up?”

“Just acting delicate.”

“Your stomach is dramatic.”

“It learned from you.”

They moved around each other the way people do after years—no bumping, no asking, just knowing. The knowing like dancers who had long forgotten the rehearsal and remembered only the music. Every reach, every turn, every pause held the memory of decades.

“So, it’s T-minus what now?” Brenda asked.

Brian eyes smiled. “That would be T-minus 2 years, 7 months, 16 days, 11 hours-.”

“Aight, aight, we got it. Sorry I asked.”

“Well, you did, woman! Barely gotta look at the app no more.”

“I know you just can’t wait for retirement, huh?”

“Nope! Trying to catch up to you. We got some RVing to do. I want to see Montana. Big sky. Nothing telling me what time it is. Just road and air and quiet …”

Brian hunted for his keys.

“Little table by the door,” Brenda said without looking.

He came back a moment later holding them. “You scary.”

“I’m observant.”

They ate together at the small table.

“Big day today,” he said.

“Don’t start.”

“Grandson duty.”

“Kendrick’s not a duty.”

“You right. He’s a blessing who eats all the snacks.”

“That part is true.”

Outside, the jacaranda tree scattered purple petals across the driveway. They drifted down slowly, soft as quiet rain, gathering at the edges of the concrete like small bruised stars. Brian reached across the table and took her hand.

“You feeling okay?”

“Why wouldn’t I be?”

“Just asking.”

“I’m fine.”

For a moment the room seemed to lean, like a picture hung slightly crooked. Brenda blinked and the world righted itself. Brian nodded, still watching her a second longer than necessary. When he stood to leave, he kissed her forehead.

“Call me if you need anything.”

“Mm-hmm. Always do.”

The front door closed, and the house returned to its gentle quiet. At the sink Brenda found one of her earrings lying beside the fruit bowl. They were the pair Brian had given her years ago — simple gold loops she wore every day, small circles that made her feel complete somehow.

“Now when did you sneak off?” she said.

She touched her left ear. Empty. The absence startled her more than it should have, as if some small part of herself had wandered off without permission. Halfway through putting it on, the room flickered.

Just for a moment.

The refrigerator’s hum stretched into a long note. The light above the sink pulsed once, slow as a heartbeat. For a breath, the air thickened, and sound seemed to come from far away. Brenda lowered her hand and waited. The silence felt heavier than it should have, crowded, as if someone else had entered the room and decided not to speak.

“Probably just tired,” she said.

She slipped the earring into place.

“There.”

The house settled again, but the quiet was different now. It was listening.

2

The house felt bigger after Brian left. The quiet had weight now, settling into corners, stretching the rooms beyond their usual size. One minute it was full of footsteps and coffee smells. The next it was just Brenda and the clock keeping time. The ticking sounded louder than it should have, each second landing with deliberate care. She stood at the sink watching water twist down the drain. The spinning water held her attention longer than necessary, pulling her gaze inward as if it meant to take something with it.

“Alright,” she said. “Let’s get moving.”

She made a small list on the back of an envelope.

Milk.

Bread.

Prescription.

Something sweet.

She sat to tie her shoes.

Her right hand missed the laces.

Not by much.

Just enough to notice.

“Hmm.”

She tried again and finished. Halfway down the hall, the room tilted. The walls leaned inward, the floor rising gently to meet her. Only for a second.

“Okay now,” she said. “None of that.”

She steadied herself with a palm against the wall, as if reminding the house to behave.

The phone rang.

“Hello?”

Silence.

She set it down.

“Dang telemarketers.”

She poured a glass of water and drank it slowly. The coolness steadied her. Across the room the doorbell rang. She opened the door. Kendrick stood there with his backpack and his bright grin. He carried the noise and sunlight of the outside world with him.

“Grandma Brenda!”

“Well, hey there, baby.”

“Surprise.”

“A good one.”

He stepped inside like he belonged.

“You look nice,” he said.

“Boy, hush.”

She reached up—and felt a tug at her ear. One earring dropped to the floor. The small circle struck the tile with the loudness of a thunderclap.

“Well, look at you,” she said. “Trying to run off again.”

Kendrick picked it up. When he attempted the hand-off, it again fell to the floor.

Brenda’s tongue clicked. “Boy …”

“My bad. Here, Grandma.”

“Thank you, sir.” She said it with exaggerated respect, and Kendrick straightened with pride.

She fixed it in the hallway mirror. Her reflection seemed slightly delayed, catching up to her movement a breath later.

“There. All together again.”

I am a “sir.” It was my birthday last week.”

“So you’re what now? 12?”

“Yep!”

“Whew. Y’all be growing up too dang fast nowadays. But to be a proper sir, you have to be knighted.”

Kendrick poked around the kitchen countertop, his stomach searching for leftovers.

“Knighted?” he asked. “Oh, you mean like off Game of Thrones?”

“Boy, what you know about all that?”

He pretended not to hear the question.

“So what we doing today?” he asked.

Brenda smiled.

“I was just about to figure that out.”

3

Kendrick wandered through the living room.

“Feels good in here,” he said.

“It’s called air conditioning.”

“No, I mean the house.”

She nodded. “I guess it does.”

The air held a softness, a quiet warmth that seemed to settle around them. They made a small plan — store first, pharmacy next. Outside, sunlight filled the driveway.

“Keys,” Brenda said.

“Phone,” Kendrick added.

“Grandson.”

“Check.”

Kendrick slipped his hand into hers without thinking, and she squeezed gently. In the car he played with the radio.

“Leave it.”

“I wasn’t changing it.”

“You were thinking about it.”

“Maybe.”

At the first traffic signal the world tilted again. The street slid sideways, buildings leaning like curious spectators.

“You okay?” Kendrick asked.

“I’m fine,” she said. She blinked hard until everything snapped back into place.

At the grocery store he pushed the cart like it was a racecar and aisle 3 was Monza. His laughter bounced off the shelves, light and effortless.

“Slow down, Lewis Hamilton,” Brenda warned. This is shopping, not a sport.”

He held up a box of sugary cereal.

“That is not breakfast,” Brenda said.

“It says it is.”

“The box is lying.”

He put it in the cart anyway. She let him.

In the checkout line, Kendrick stared at the tabloid and wellness magazines, featuring cover models and headlines and images he’d never be concerned with.

“Grandma, you ever feel like a day feel different for no reason?”

“Some days got their own personality,” she said. “Some days whisper before they change everything.”

Back in the car she forgot for a second which way to turn the key. Then she remembered.

“Professional,” she said.

“Never doubted you.”

At the pharmacy the air smelled like medicine and cold air; a scent sharp and clean like a place where pain was negotiated daily. A man who looked like he just woke up shuffled past. He moved slowly, almost drifting, as if time held him differently.

“Grandma,” Kendrick said, “why that man wearing pajamas?”

“Some people like to be comfortable.”

He nodded. “Makes sense.”

Outside again, the day waited gently.

“Next stop,” Kendrick said, “something sweet.”

“We’ll see.”

“That’s a yes.”

Brenda smiled. Grandmother and grandson followed the day wherever it wanted to go, neither of them knowing how carefully the day was guiding them.

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Comments

Falguni Jain Wed, 03/06/2026 - 14:41

The manuscript presents an interesting plot that keeps the reader curious about what happens next. However, the opening could benefit from a stronger hook to create a more immediate sense of intrigue.

Stewart Carry Wed, 03/06/2026 - 19:58

I disagree with the previous remark. To me, the hook is in the finely-drawn characters, the fabulous dialogue that says far more than the words themselves and the fact that it is so relatable, ordinary and normal. The dramatic moments creep up on us, almost undetectable until we realize that underlying this normality, something is fundamentally wrong. It's a great start.

Jennifer Rarden Thu, 04/06/2026 - 18:00

My heart is already breaking for what I can only imagine is coming. There's some wonderful imagery, especially when it comes to the interactions between the characters.