Ava’s mother had called again last night. She’d silenced the call on instinct, but the image of her thumb pressing Decline still lingered in her mind.
Now, morning light filtered through the blinds of her kitchen window as she sat at the table, laptop open, one hand wrapped around a mug gone cold.
She shook the thought away and stared at the Zoom logo on the screen, the message beneath it reading: Please wait, the meeting host will let you in soon. She drummed her fingers on the tabletop, her pulse ticking in her wrist. She’d spent months seeking the right tech for her firm to invest millions in. Everything rested on this. If Solace Tech’s new AI was what she hoped, groundbreaking enough to change everything, it could buy her more than a bonus. It could buy her life back.
She’d booked the earliest available slot for the demo, but punctuality didn’t appear to be Julian Vexler’s strength.
The screen flickered to life, revealing a single empty office chair. Behind it, a virtual backdrop projected the Solace logo: two hands with their fingers entwined—a shamelessly curated image of connection, just like the product he was selling.
Then Julian appeared, dropping into the seat with the distracted air of someone mid-thought. Early thirties, maybe, with pale skin and a tangle of dark curls that looked like they hadn’t met a comb in days. He didn’t smile. His eyes, ringed with shadows, flicked toward the camera like it had interrupted him. He wore a threadbare black hoodie, bunched around his shoulders like he’d yanked it on without looking. He spoke without greeting, like the meeting had already started, and she was the one who was late.
“Hi, Miss… Sinclair,” he said. “Thanks for making time. I’m Julian Vexler, Solace’s founder.”
“Good morning. Sorry about my video camera… it’s been playing up.” Ava glanced at the Post-it note stuck over it.
“Oh, sure thing. If you’re comfortable, I can remote access and fix th—”
“Against protocol, I’m afraid. Shall we move on? Thanks for walking me through this. I’m excited to see what it can do.”
“Of course. So that you know, this isn’t the full system. We’re using a sandbox environment today. But it should give you a feel for how the Solace AI responds.”
She nodded, watching as Julian shared his screen and opened a sleek, minimal interface. A single blinking cursor waited in the center.
“You can type anything here,” he said. “But for the demo, I suggest starting simple.” He paused. “Try: ‘I can’t sleep lately.’”
She typed the prompt. The screen paused for half a second before the software responded:
I’m sorry you’re having trouble sleeping. Do you want to talk about what’s keeping you up?
“Okay. That’s… gentle.” She sighed, slightly underwhelmed.
“Right? It’s designed to pick up tone, even in short text. Try adding some emotional context. Maybe something like, ‘I keep fighting with my boyfriend.’
She hesitated, then typed it.
The AI replied:
Sometimes the people we love are the hardest to connect with.
Her pulse thudded at her collarbone. Even that watered-down version of the AI felt more compassionate than half the people in her contacts list. She could already picture the impact it would have when it launched.
On impulse, she stabbed a new entry into Solace.
I agree. Sometimes... people don’t say what they really mean.
Julian coughed. "We shouldn't—"
The AI answered before he could finish:
People don’t always speak love out loud. When words fail, ask yourself… are their actions saying what they cannot.
"See?" Julian cut in quickly. "It adapts. It learns. But let's stay on script. I don't want you to miss the key features."
For the following fifty minutes, Julian guided her through basic interactions—typing, responding, watching the system adjust its tone based on phrasing and punctuation. Some prompts were eerily accurate. Others, a bit… off. But on the whole, it felt intuitive.
By the time they’d finished, Ava realized she hadn’t checked the clock once. “Well,” she said, sitting back in her kitchen chair. “That hour flew by.”
Julian grinned. “Good sign.” He tapped a key and stopped the screen share. “I’ve included a few transcripts in the investment pitch deck. They’re examples from our in-house testers, but they demonstrate the product’s potential. Hopefully, they can help you convince the Partners at Darkwater we’re worth a shot.”
“Thanks. I’ll go through them with interest.”
“Great. And if you have any questions, reach out.”
She peeled the Post-it from the camera, closed the laptop, and pushed back from her kitchen table. Twenty minutes later, coat zipped and scarf wrapped tight, she stepped outside.
Ava loved cold weather. People didn’t stare as much when it was cold. They kept their heads down, and their hands shoved in their pockets, too focused on their own discomfort to notice her.
The steep streets of Pacific Heights stretched before her, the incline tugging at her calves as she walked. The grand Victorian homes stood in hushed elegance, their bay windows catching the morning light, winking at her.
Her thoughts drifted back to her mother in Fairbridge, a small town just outside Boston. She had stood in the doorway of Ava’s childhood bedroom, arms folded across her chest as Ava packed. The silence between them had been thick with the ghosts of old arguments.
Then, as Ava zipped her suitcase, her mother finally spoke. “Maybe it’s easier for everyone if you go. You can't undo what you did.”
The words had followed her out of the house, echoing in her ears as she loaded her bags into the Uber.
The guilt still followed her, but she'd stopped trying to outrun it. San Francisco offered her anonymity, too busy to care who she used to be, or what had happened that night.
As she descended toward the flatter streets of Cow Hollow, the hum of traffic grew louder, punctuated by the distant wail of a siren and the impatient beep-beep of a reversing delivery truck. The shops were waking up now, metal shutters clattering open, the scent of fresh bread wafting from the French bakery on the corner.
A man on a bike zipped past, balancing a tray of coffee cups in one hand, his messenger bag bouncing against his hip.
Ava stepped aside, catching her reflection in the plate-glass window of a chic fashion boutique.
She flinched.
It didn’t matter how many surgeries she had endured. She still had the kind of face that made people look twice, then look away.
Despite months of facial reconstruction, the left side of her face still looked like a puzzle a child had forced together. The tissue stretched thin, pink and glossy in places, rough and stippled in others. Her cheekbone, once defined, now lay sunken. She’d been lucky to keep her eye, but the scarring dragged it downward at the corner, as if it couldn’t bear to face what had happened.
Her breath fogged the glass, blurring her reflection into something kinder. But beyond the misted outline of her face, the mannequin sharpened into focus… a faceless figure, flawless in glossy plastic.
Ava swallowed. Just for a moment, she let herself pretend the glass was a mirror, and the mannequin, her. No burn scars. No sideways glances or pity.
A gull’s harsh cry shattered the moment. Its shadow skimmed past her before it veered overhead. The spell broken, she tugged her hood forward, as if she could disappear inside it, and turned from the window.
The warmth of the coffee shop enveloped her the moment she stepped inside. The scent of roasted beans, vanilla, and something faintly spiced curled in the air, familiar and comforting.
She released a slow breath. She’d been running on fumes. Too many late nights chasing the deal she believed could change everything.
Muted voices hummed, blending with the hiss and sputter of milk being frothed in a steady symphony of morning routine. She kept her head down and her hood up, her blonde hair falling forward in a curtain, shielding her face from wandering eyes.
A woman stood ahead of her in line, draped in an oatmeal-colored cashmere coat, the fabric so fine it pooled like liquid over her shoulders. She scrolled through her phone with a manicured finger, one high-heeled boot crossed over the other as she leaned effortlessly against the wall.
Ava focused on the chalkboard menu, though she already knew what she’d order. The same thing she ordered every morning. A predictable moment in a world where so much was uncertain. She clung to these small rituals, ticking them off as checkpoints.
At the end of the counter, three young men in jeans and logo-stamped hoodies clustered around a bar-height table.
“…the follow-through sucks. Once you nudge it off script, it derails the conversation…”
“C’mon, Aidan. You’re gonna nail this. Your stuff’s already next level,” one of them said, shoving his mug aside and leaning on the table.
“Yeah, but half the time it answers like it’s got a hangover,” replied the one she presumed was Aidan.
She didn’t mean to listen, but their conversation had a certain cadence, the kind that belonged to people who knew they were the smartest ones in the room.
“…it knows when the user is upset, but the responses are flat. Robotic,” said the one with the carefully trimmed beard and warm bronze skin, every edge of him groomed to precision. “It’s not the model. It’s the emotional tagging.”
“The empathy model works,” Aidan muttered. “But we’re trying to shoehorn nuance into it at scale.”
She turned the phrase over in her head. She wasn’t entirely sure what it meant, but they sounded like software engineers. The city was full of software start-ups, including the one waiting on her desk.
A mounted TV above the counter played the morning news, the volume low but audible. On-screen, a panel of experts studied two near-identical paintings.
“One of these was painted by a human,” the anchor said. “The other by an AI. Can you tell the difference?”
A split-screen view showed a close-up of each painting: rich brushstrokes with soft blending and deliberate imperfections. They looked the same.
"This AI doesn’t just copy. It learns," an expert said. "From centuries of techniques.”
"But that’s the problem," another panelist interjected. "If AI can fake a soul, where does that leave us?"
Across the room, Aidan lifted his cup. “Mimic a soul, my ass.” He took a sip. “Conventional AI still can’t tell the difference between sarcasm and sincerity.”
One of them muttered something in reply, and they all laughed.
“It’s not about prediction,” Aidan said. “It’s about interpretation.”
Ava raised an eyebrow. That’s what everyone said. That AI couldn’t decode tone, hesitation, or doubt. That it didn’t get people.
But the Solace Tech software she was preparing to present to investors at the venture capital firm where she worked did.
It was designed for subtext.
That’s what made it revolutionary.
She dismissed the conversation with a silent scoff. Coffee shop philosophers.
“Dommi?”
The male barista’s voice cut through the conversation, sharp enough to pull Ava’s attention away.
The woman in the cashmere coat stepped up to the counter, running a hand through her black, chin-length bob. Her lipstick was the shade of soft nude, her entire presence the kind that turned heads without trying.
The barista grinned. “Here’s your double chocolate macchiato with oat milk, vanilla syrup, and extra cream.”
She laughed. “I’m sorry for all the extravagant extras.”
His eyes sparkled. “You’re worth it.”
She took the cup from him, but he held it a fraction too long. The pause stretched, subtle but deliberate, then he let go.
Ava looked away.
She used to be part of moments like that.
Before.
“…doesn’t know how to read between the lines.” Another snippet of conversation drifted over from the men at the corner table.
She had spent the last year learning to read between the lines. To pick apart the difference between curiosity and discomfort. Between glances that settled on her face without reaching her eyes, and the ones that deliberately skated past.
She longed to be looked at with want, not pity. Once, she’d turned heads… now she turned stomachs. And no matter how much she pretended it didn’t matter, some days, it still crushed her.
She glanced toward Aidan. Dark hair, a little too long, fell over his forehead as he leaned in. His jaw was rough with stubble, the kind that suggested either exhaustion or indifference, but it suited him. He wasn’t classically handsome. Not really. But when he smiled, his eyes wrinkled softly, like crumpled paper. It made her think he was someone who hadn’t learned to hide the good parts of himself.
She wanted to move closer.
Not to speak.
Just to be near.
There was something about him. Something that felt safe and electric all at once.
Like the air before a summer storm.
Or the beginning of a book she suddenly couldn’t wait to read.
The impulse startled her. It had been so long since she’d felt that pull, but she didn’t try to stop it.
She told herself it was nothing, mere curiosity.
But deep inside, something flickered.
A part of her that had died in the accident stirred. Warm and aching… waking up.
She turned away before he looked up. Not because she didn’t want him to see her looking, but because she couldn’t bear it if he flinched. And yet, she wasn’t ready to stop hoping that one day, someone might truly see her for who she was.
The barista coughed. “Ava, isn’t it?”
She turned to him and adjusted the fall of her hair, letting it curtain the left side of her face. The machine hissed and spat, then he slid the paper cup across to her. “Hazelnut latte,” he said, his voice warm but impersonal. “Here you go.”
She stepped forward to take it. For the briefest second, his eyes caught hers, then flicked to the side, the sight of her startling him. His hand pulled back too fast, as though the cup had burned him.
The motion was small.
But it landed like a slap.
Her hand shook as she tapped her phone to the card reader, its screen casting a faint glow. A quiet beep. She turned and stepped back outside into the cold. She was tired of hiding. Something had to change, because this wasn’t living.


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Really interesting premise,…
Really interesting premise, and the writing feels natural.
The submission has strong…
The submission has strong atmosphere and emotional depth. Well written.
Smart and very topical. The…
Smart and very topical. The AI premise is a great hook for many people and in this instance, it's entirely plausible. Exceleent characters and dialogue.