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An emotionally stunted tech bro is recruited to help launch a new product based on his late brother's work: a wearable helmet that livestreams the subconscious. It's a chance to get his career going again and win back his ex girlfriend, but he'll have to deal with more insight than he ever imagined.
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These characters feel…
These characters feel wonderfully real, and the situations they're thrust in capture something essential about being a contemporary 30-something.
Interesting Concept
An interesting look into the world of technology and its effects on intimate relationships. Suggestion. Stay close on Jason and spend some more time with him alone so that we can get a better feel for and an understanding of his ineptness and self-doubt BEFORE entering the presentation?
Contemporary tech story
Takes us into the world of 21st century tech and all it’s positive and negative aspects.
A grounded take on a sci fi staple
It takes a while to get going, but this darkly comic take on tech, big business, and human interactions is a good read.