I can't (even though I should be able to if I call myself a writer) express how much this means. So helpful to enable me to polish my novel. I'm beyond grateful for the encouragement and suggestions for improvement, all of which I will shortly work on. I've found the actionable feedback to be spot on. Many thanks. Looking forward to my other critique.
As I said with the first one critique, this second one is also brilliant. The encouragement means so much, and the suggestions for improvement are spot-on. These are things I can and will apply to the rest of my novel. This is amazing value for money since I get to enter the competition, too.