Thank you, Paula, for your valuable plus package manuscript critique. Your thoughts, suggestions, and expertise will help me improve my writing and guide my thoughts to create a story that my readers will not want to put down.
Also, thank you for your praise on the things I did right and the valuable critiques on what I can improve on. I will take everything you suggested and hopefully make my character's passions and desires more vivid, So much so that the reader can’t wait to see what is on the next page.
