Minotaur

Genre
Action Adventure
Screenplay Award Sub-Category
Film Script
Award Category
Screenplay Award 2023
Logline or Premise
Ashamed of being treated as a hero, a self-loathing war veteran hopes to earn valor by searching remote wilderness for a missing child, only to find she’s being hunted through a booby-trapped labyrinth by a psychotic green beret.
Submission file
742084.pdf

Comments

Felicity Wren Thu, 10/08/2023 - 23:42

Really great set up of the characters, a problem to solve already in action and clear professional writing.

An intriguing start, with an excellent voice.

Felicity Wren Thu, 10/08/2023 - 23:43

Really great set up of the characters, a problem to solve already in action and clear professional writing.

An intriguing start, with an excellent voice.

Barri Evins Sat, 19/08/2023 - 08:15

Confident focused writing. Appealing twists that deftly play against our expectations. Solid character introductions. This feels edgy, a solid tonal match with the character. The set up is interesting, lean, conveys character, flaw, dilemma, and makes us want to know more.

Barri Evins Sun, 20/08/2023 - 04:35

Wonderful eye for detail here!

Continent
Northern America