Genre
Book Award Sub-Category
2025 Young Or Golden Writer
Book Cover Image
Logline or Premise
When a black GI in 1943 is unjustly accused of murder, will the inhabitants of the Devon town in which he is based put aside prejudice to uncover the truth?
First 10 Pages - 3K Words Only
I have attached my first 10 pages as a pdf below.
Children's Picture Book, Graphic Comic Book or Other Illustrated Book
Book Shop Link
Comments
A very engaging and…
A very engaging and realistic set-up. The character and strength of presence of Bellucci is a great hook all by itself. I'm not sure that the convoy's progress into the small English community isn't a bit too long drawn out. Perhaps the dialogue on the vehicle could be dialled back a bit to allow them to arrive at their destination a little earlier to see at least brief contact with a local or two. That would definitely add a dash of colour!