Rowen Lee

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Jordan Kantey Fri, 04/08/2023 - 16:51

The hook held excellent mystery with multiple intrigues that roused curiosity, from the withholding of the name to the mysterious dialogue with a half-revealed stranger.

There are beautiful and unexpected descriptions and phrases, such as 'That night, instead of her clothing, she reached for the sheets, and let her eyelids sink shut.' Distinct sense of voice and style.