Rowen Lee is an undergraduate student at Brown University, studying literary arts and cognitive neuroscience. She enjoys writing tragedies in flowing metaphors and artistic imagery.
The hook held excellent mystery with multiple intrigues that roused curiosity, from the withholding of the name to the mysterious dialogue with a half-revealed stranger.
There are beautiful and unexpected descriptions and phrases, such as 'That night, instead of her clothing, she reached for the sheets, and let her eyelids sink shut.' Distinct sense of voice and style.
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Beautiful descriptions! Your…
Beautiful descriptions! Your prose is so refined and filled with a unique voice. Well done!
Fantastic opening
Your opening had me hooked from the start. Well done
Strong premise and mystery
The hook held excellent mystery with multiple intrigues that roused curiosity, from the withholding of the name to the mysterious dialogue with a half-revealed stranger.
There are beautiful and unexpected descriptions and phrases, such as 'That night, instead of her clothing, she reached for the sheets, and let her eyelids sink shut.' Distinct sense of voice and style.