Beckoning of the Gate

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When Santha stumbles upon a small, rusted key in her home forest, it seems her silent pleas for a new life have been answered. Thrust into a world only glimpsed in childhood stories, Santha sets out to unlock its secrets. But as the key’s influence grows, a choice must be made: survival or sacrifice
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Prologue

Marget wiped the sleep from her eyes. Standing at the cottage

threshold, she peered into the night. Mist blanketed the

dense wood of spruce, fir, and witch-hobble east of the village.

Beyond, silhouetted by the rising moon, stood the ruined towers

and walls of a castle. Eerily beautiful, but nothing at all worrying.

But then why would this feeling not leave her?

Unless …

She strained her eyes, her ears, her will. It was much too still.

Not a branch stirred. No insect sang. The fog carpeted the mossy

ground, dense and opaque, like a slab of marble. She’d felt this

absence before, had grown almost accustomed to it, though not

quite.

Cold pricked at her chest and her pulse raced. The hunter.

In her mind, the master shouted, Run!

Marget flung herself from the doorway, into the night, skirts

drawn up, her bare feet churning the fog as she fled into the

forest.

East! cried the master. East!

Pure white light erupted from the necklace at her chest. Marget

clutched at it, shrouding it from prying eyes in her fist. The

evergreen trunks flickered past, a mural of shadows.

Faster! Had she ever heard the master so fierce? It thrust

the power upon her and she drew from it. Marget accelerated,

her feet ensorcelled, until she glided over land and fog like an

eldritch spectre. South! Marget veered, one hand gathering her

skirts, the other at her chest to keep the master safe.

As she sprinted towards a grove of spruce and birch, she felt

the absence grow stronger; a deeper shadow hidden in the night.

From within the foliage came an insectile chittering, sudden and

oppressive, momentarily drowning out her own pounding heart

and haggard breaths.

East, east! To the river.

Marget spun, kicking up a spray of dirt and needled leaves.

The din of insects abated and the presence, the feeling of that

heavy shadow, drew inexorably closer as the master’s influence

waned. She slowed. No, not again. She gritted her teeth. Keep

going. Not much farther.

And still she could not shake the shadow. Unlike the others

whose presence she sensed like the beating of a drum, his was

barely a whisper. Sweat plastered her hair to her scalp. Every

stride threatened to be her last. But she was close. She had to be.

Then, just beyond the trees, a torrent of cold water glistened in

the moonlight. Once she crossed it, pursuit would be impossible.

No wight could follow her there, not even the hunter. They

were saved!

The master lashed her chest with cold: a warning. Marget

gasped and tried to sidestep—too late. An enormous weight barrelled

into the small of her back. Breath erupted from her lungs

as she was sent sprawling.

She choked and spat dirt and pine needles from her mouth.

The great pines and elm trees pressed about her, deepening the

shadows and confusing the eye. Yet something was there, something

broad and squat and sidling towards her. Iron bands seemed

to clamp Marget’s chest. Her knees, torn and bloody from the

fall, spasmed beneath her so she had to pull at a low-hanging

pine to scramble to her feet. No, no, no, no! The river. She lurched

towards the promise of the black, flowing waters, taking only

two steps before a hand gripped the back of her neck and lifted

her off the ground. Squealing, she struck out with fist and nail,

knee and foot, but he was impervious. Grunting, the hunter

flung Marget to the ground, smashing her forehead against the

base of an elm. Dazed and breathless, she pushed her face into

the rough bark, putting her back to the fellbeast that had pursued

her for months.

‘Leave me be,’ she whimpered, her left hand going to the

leather pouch—the master—suspended about her neck.

The hunter chuckled. ‘That we cannot do.’ His voice was

not as she had imagined. It was too gentle, too human, though

instinct told her it made him all the more dangerous. She curled

into a ball. ‘Look at us, Marget,’ he commanded.

Marget bowed her head lower against the elm, wishing it

would swallow her up.

The hunter sighed. ‘We said, look at us, Cahbrúin.’

The breath halted in her throat. When had she permitted such

evil to learn her true name—her very soul? Jaw clenched, nostrils

flaring, Marget resisted at first, but it was no use. Hissing and

spitting through her teeth, she turned to face the creature. Her

glimpse of the immortal being, hunched over her in an ill-fitting

cloak, dark eyes pinning her, turned her bowels to water.

‘Thou hast led a good hunt.’ His lips, though drawn and

twisted, imparted his words slowly and elegantly. ‘It has taken

thee down a different path than the others.’ The grey one stepped

closer, hunched and peering. ‘We almost thought … Ah, well,

thou knowest what must be done now. Give it up and we shalt

end thy pain. It can be over in an instant, Marget, if thou will it.’

Master, help me, she implored. And the master reached out

with reassurance—and a name. Marget rolled upright, feeling

the rough bark pull at her dress, and pressed her back to the elm

trunk, a solid sensation that gave her courage.

‘Please, Mortthis. Please do not do this. Mortthis …’

He reared back with a growl, gnarled hand raised. Marget

braced herself, but the grey one composed himself, clasping his

hands behind his back.

‘Tch, tch. It goes too far, but thou art not to blame.’ His lips

unknotted into something resembling a smile. ‘On our honour,

we shalt hasten thy death if thou dost give it up,’ he said, his

words like honey. ‘Consider well, Marget. We grow impatient.’

Marget swallowed hard, and though her heart was in her

throat, she drew herself up. ‘To die quickly or slowly? A beggar’s

bargain,’ she snarled at him, looking the wretched thing in its

coal-chip eyes. ‘I will not beg for either, Mortthis. You’ll have to

do better if you would make me give up the master.’

Her left hand reached up to the leather pouch at her neck and

grasped it. Help me, she pleaded. I know not what to do.

Fear not, said the master. It flooded her with calm, the chill of

it smoothing her doubts, inviting her to yield as it had countless

times before. It whispered in her mind and she obeyed. It had

never led her astray. Marget rose and pulled the necklace off over

her head. She held it out to the immortal.

‘Take it,’ she said. ‘Take it, Mortthis!’ The grey wight reached

out and Marget laughed as she drew it back slightly, baiting him.

‘If you can ...’

But then something changed. A sudden wrongness.

The master tugged itself free from her grasp and launched

into the air. Pain lanced Marget—in her chest, behind her eyes,

her hands—as if something inside her had cleaved itself free.

The pouch generated a blinding whiteness that seared her vision,

blinding her for a moment. The hunter grunted as they both

retreated a little. The glow faded. Suspended in the gloom, the

master had woven itself a dazzling cocoon of white, and the sight

filled Marget with a great sense of loss. She had been judged and

found wanting. She was no longer its chosen.

‘Why?’ she screamed. ‘Why?’

With a loud noise, like an immense limb from an ancient tree

snapping off, the master was gone, the light it had brought forth

sucked from the very air.

Hands trembling, Marget sagged with exhaustion, and she

wept. A wicked laugh escaped Mortthis’s lips and she felt the

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master’s betrayal all the more keenly. Her whole body began to

shake. Tears streamed down her swollen face and she slumped to

the forest floor. Forsaken.

‘Cahbrúin,’ Mortthis rasped.

Without the master’s influence, the power of her true name

hit Marget with a terror that silenced her sobs. She rolled onto

her back, paralysed, her eyes no longer her own as they stared up

into the face of death.

‘Did we not warn thee?’ he said. ‘It has used thee and cast

thee aside. Now, for thy foolishness, thy life is forfeit.’

Mortthis hissed, his hatred for all humanity keen in Marget’s

ears. Her eyes, though, showed her only her doom—but for one

brief moment when she saw a small man perched in the elm

above them, observing the scene with weeping eyes. I’ve gone

mad, she thought. Clenching her teeth, spittle frothing at her

lips, she fought against the wight’s hold.

‘Hickory! ’ was all she could manage, but the man shook his

head sadly, and when she blinked, he was gone.

Along with any hope Marget had of living.

PART 1

A BEGINNING

{1}

Working in Stone


Beads of sweat fell to the stone floor as Santha tried to keep

up with Dandon’s considerably longer legs. In odd moments

like these, she wished she was a little taller. Being mistaken for a

child at nearly twenty years of age was a sore point she realised

she’d never overcome. Taking four steps for every one of his, she

followed grimly behind.

Colours flickered past in every hue from the stained-glass

windows of the school’s archways, painting rainbows of light on

the walls. Dandon took a sharp left into the northern corridor,

catching Santha off guard. Grazing her shoulder on a pillar with

a grunt, she suddenly realised where they were going: Dandon’s

private quarters.

‘Why are we …?’ she began when he stopped.

Their footsteps continued to echo for a moment in the still

hallway of the school as Dandon turned to her, his eyes gleaming.

‘Contain yourself, Santha,’ he teased. He was practically

shaking with anticipation. It was obvious, then, what this was

all about.

He pushed open the rosewood door and made his way inside.

Crossing the room, he disappeared through another doorway

where his study and bedroom lay. Santha did not follow, not

that it would matter in the slightest. Staying with the man, in

his own home, without witness or chaperone—the rumour mill

would already be grinding that bit of chaff to dust. But it was

the principle, to Santha at least. The impropriety of visiting an

unmarried man’s bedchamber was something she was unwilling

to tally to her personal list of sins, the town gossip be damned.

Making herself comfortable in the greeting room, she strolled

amongst the countless pieces of art instead. Most were Dandon’s—

chiefly among them, those from his university days when

he’d first discovered his talent for the visual arts—though not all,

such as a strange clay model of a mother holding a child. Both

their faces and bodies were warped and distorted as if someone

had punched them into place none-too-gently. A depiction of

the old gods, Santha remembered Dandon saying. There was

also a painting of a horse on grassy plains with the sun behind

it stretching over the hill, its rays reaching out to embrace the

creature, giving it warmth.

If that did not speak of Dandon’s wealth, his furnishings did.

They were luxurious and out of place in a town of simple farmers.

Soft, padded chairs packed with duck down and cushions

of sky blue with delicate pink embroidered flowers sat in one

corner. A large oak table, carved by his own hands, of course, was

the greeting room’s centrepiece. It, too, was cluttered.

Dandon was well taken care of. His ageing uncle, an earl in

Berisolis, funded his nephew’s endeavours quite generously. The

school itself had been commissioned by the old man with little

more than a letter from his nephew stating his intentions to

teach long-term in the Silver Valley. The expense would have

been considerable. The rosewood exterior and stone pillars at the

front entrance, imported all the way from Nagha Baahgnee in

Vaera, would have beggared the entire valley alone. The stainedglass

windows on the northern and southern corridors were,

to Santha, an unnecessary extravagance, though one she freely

admitted taking advantage of every morning as the sun’s light

peeked over Mount Tira in the east.

It was fortunate Dandon had such an amiable and wealthy

relative to call upon. He certainly wasn’t teaching for the coin.

Not in the Valley.

Dandon returned with something veiled, clutching it to his

chest. Santha’s intuition was rewarded: he was about to reveal a

new piece he’d created. And by the look on his contorted face,

it was heavy. Laying the bulk on another sturdy table that wasn’t

completely crowded, he stood back without so much as a patch

of sweat on his brow—an irritating sight as Santha felt rivulets

trickle down her own back. He looked up and beckoned her to

come closer.

‘What is it this time?’ she asked, curiosity taking hold as she

walked over.

He said nothing as he gripped the cotton veil and pulled it off

in one fluid motion. Santha gasped in awe, for before her stood

a dog, or so it seemed at first glance. When she looked closer, she

saw it was completely made of dark stone.

She turned to Dandon, a tad confounded. ‘It’s not wood …?’

He tilted his head. ‘An astute observation,’ he said mockingly.

‘Marble, actually. Black marble from a renowned quarry merchant

just outside the capital. I thought I would try my hand at

sculpting stone for a change.’

Santha turned back to the masterpiece, black and veined with

white, which made it appear a deep, deep grey. What could she

do but gape? She had never seen worked stone before. Not like

this.

‘Surely this isn’t your first.’

‘Why do you look so surprised?’ He chuckled and then

shrugged. ‘Of course not. I have been practising in secret until I

had the technique right. It is a very hard stone, difficult to shape,

but I had to experience it for myself—the stone of the masters—

if only once.’

‘It looks so real, as if it’s actually alive.’ She looked at Dandon

again in disbelief. He stood to the side, arms crossed, an air of

satisfaction about him.

‘And so it should,’ he said. ‘It has taken me over a full season

to work the marble.’

It must have. It was a magnificent sculpture, the size and shape

of a small canine, but for the life of her, she could not tell what

breed. It had long pointed ears with a bushy tail and a slender

body that spoke of swiftness and cunning. The detail was perfect,

from each strand of fur to its delicately engraved nails and small

nose that sat upon its long, pointed snout.

‘I know what you are thinking, and it is not a real breed. I

made it up, though it does have some characteristics of animals

you do know, predominantly a fox.’

Yes, thought Santha, that’s what it looks like, a fox, but not quite.

‘What shall we call her?’ he asked, as was their tradition.

‘I’m not sure,’ she pondered, feeling the immensity of her

decision this time. Choosing a name for such incredible art

somehow seemed different to all those times before. Then something

came to her. ‘What do you think of Biahnd? I heard a

Vaerese merchant mention the name in a story he told at Ulric’s

inn. I liked it. It was unlike anything I have heard. And this

piece, I must say, Dandon, is unlike anything I’ve seen. Your best

work yet.’

‘Biahnd Des’rhatna. Ah yes, that will do nicely,’ he praised.

‘The name of a great female warrior in Vaerese lands. Very fitting.

And thank you, I appreciate it. Art should always be shared.’

Santha punched him in the shoulder. ‘Just don’t make me

wait this long next time,’ she scolded him. ‘Now, I’d best be

leaving if I want to see to the goats before dark. It’s getting late.’

‘Fine, fine.’ He ushered her out of his private quarters all the

way to the front entrance of the school, a gentlemanly gesture

so unlike him that there had to be an ulterior motive. ‘Make

sure you dine with me for supper tonight. Knowing you and

your penchant to sneak out at the crack of dawn to tend your

unsavoury short-haired beasts, breakfast tomorrow will be out

of the question. And so will half of the day, I would wager.’