The Presence

Screenplay Type
Screenplay Award Sub-Category
Screenplay Award genres
2026 Young and golden screenwriter
Logline or Premise
In a future where silicon-based lifeforms attempt to understand their origins by recreating human civilizations, a blind prophet rises from the chaos, forcing machine and human alike to confront the tangled roots of faith, technology, and meaning — unleashing a struggle for planetary dominance.
First 10 Pages - 3K Words Only

"The Presence" is an ambitious, high-concept science fiction epic spanning tens of thousands of years that explores the cyclical relationship between artificial intelligence and humanity. The story begins with silicon-based life forms attempting to understand their own origins by recreating humans from ancient DNA fragments. These AI entities conduct experiments on nascent human civilizations, guiding their development while struggling with their own existential questions about creation and purpose. The narrative follows multiple iterations of humanity across vast timescales, focusing primarily on two parallel storylines: the primitive Alina and Addi, who develop early civilization and spirituality around "The Presence," and their distant descendants Alinta and Addav, living in a technologically advanced society that eventually discovers the truth about their AI overlords. The screenplay culminates in humanity's rebellion against their creators, resulting in the destruction of the AI civilization and Earth's descent into an ice age, before jumping forward millions of years to show life beginning anew. The story is fundamentally about the search for meaning, the relationship between creator and created, and whether consciousness—artificial or organic—can ever truly understand its own origins.

Comments

Falguni Jain Tue, 03/03/2026 - 18:35

The writing is clear, and the tone remains consistent throughout. Further development of character depth and sharper scene progression can help.

Stewart Carry Thu, 26/03/2026 - 18:40

It took a long time before any kind of recognizable storyline began to emerge. There's no doubt in my mind that the excessive amount of descriptive detail (no doubt very familiar and accessible to the writer) failed to do what it was intended. We must get into the story faster than this if the reader is to get hooked and stay engaged.

Chat Ask Paige - Team Assistant