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2024 Young Or Golden Writer
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When teenage Lucy visits an old Victorian house by the sea, her 1980's life becomes entwined with one form the 1890s. As things unfold she becomes determined to discover the purpose of the dreams now haunting her.
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The set-up is well…
The set-up is well established early on as the characters and the hint of conflict is dripfed into the dialogue. I think there might be too much telling going on in the descriptive passages and I just wonder what kind of an original take this will be on a rather common young adult premise.
Thanks again for your…
Thanks again for your insight Stewart.