Grump-Grump the Tummabump

2025 Young Or Golden Writer
Book Cover Image
Logline or Premise
Gump-Gump, a young tummabump, is called Grump-Grump because he never wants to help his mummy, but soon learns that life is a whole let better after turning over a new leaf and becoming kind and considerate.
Children's Picture Book, Graphic Comic Book or Other Illustrated Book

Comments

Stewart Carry Sat, 05/07/2025 - 16:02

The premise works well although I think more could have been created to elicit a few laughs along his journey to self-awareness. Ramp up the stakes a bit more and tease out the moment of acceptance and change a bit longer. Unlike most children's books that have illustrations, I felt these didn't quite live up to the strength of the storyline. Just an opinion.