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In a world where women are treated as second-class citizens, two unlikely allies must confront the dangers surrounding them, forced to rely on their wits and courage to defend themselves against relentless threats that seek to put their safety at risk. A Thelma and Louise story for our generation.
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Jumping in time on the first…
Jumping in time on the first act is effective, but risky - The author seems to know a great deal about influencers and social media. I am more than a little curious how it pays off.
The dialogue and the overall…
The dialogue and the overall tone is smooth and 'sexy' in a kind of fabricated 'Baywatch' way. The problem with that is the characters don't stand out one from the other, either male or female. A bit like a soap opera in which everyone looks alike, speaks alike and acts alike. It flows very well despite that but I was unable to detect an inciting incident that moves the action forward by raising the stakes.