Not Yet

By Taylor Bartczak on
Screenplay Type
2026 Feature Film Award
Screenplay Award Sub-Category
2026 Story World Award
Screenplay Award genres
Drama
2026 Young and golden screenwriter
2026 Golden Screenwriter Award
Logline or Premise
A family faces adversity following the grandmother’s cancer diagnosis and the revelation that the father is not biological.
First 10 Pages - 3K Words Only

See script attached.

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Comments

Stewart Carry Wed, 13/05/2026 - 19:20

All that chat about music would be fine if it didn't continue for 7 pages! An inciting incident needs more of a build-up, especially if it's focused on the main character. I'd trim back the opening scene, create something a bit more dramatic and then get to the bad news. Just an idea.