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Equality Award
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Former NASA employee, turned Astronomy teacher Cory Fox , returns to his former employers with the idea of embarking on the world's first one way manned mission into space, on his own.
First 10 Pages - 3K Words Only
After a recent cancer diagnosis, a high school astronomy teacher finally has the chance to live out his dream of going to space but there is no promise of his safe return.
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A very engaging script with…
A very engaging script with well-defined characters and a thoughtful set-up that really hooks us into Cory's awful situation. With the focus in this excerpt on establishing a connection between the reader/viewer and the protagonist, the writer clearly demonstrates a clear understanding of how to keep an audience engaged and emotionally invested on what happens.
Excellent exposition, and…
Excellent exposition, and Cory is a very lovable character. The pacing seems European- slow and steady storytelling.