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When devoted family man Max is mistaken for a high-class mature escort, he reluctantly enters a secret life of wealth and privilege to pay off his debts. Set in the contrasting world of excess and luxury against the reality of suburban life, Escorted explores how far Max will go to save his family.
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The premise is great but I…
The premise is great but I think the execution needs a bit more work, especially in the bar where I think there's far more potential in the misunderstanding to become more engaging. Cut down on the lengthy descriptive paragraphs.