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2024 Young Or Golden Writer
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Imprisoned for poisoning his wife Lauren, Lee Lebrock asks his wife’s friend, Jill, to help him prove his innocence. Although reluctant to help, her own investigations aid in the discovery of the shocking truth.
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I felt the opening lacks…
I felt the opening lacks pace and the hook to keep me engaged. I didn't detect any inciting incident by page 10. Much to work on still.
Thank you Stewart, all taken…
In reply to I felt the opening lacks… by Stewart Carry
Thank you Stewart, all taken board.
Hello Stewart, I have been…
In reply to I felt the opening lacks… by Stewart Carry
Hello Stewart, I have been thinking on your comment and will obviously review. In general terms, did you get enough about the characters?
thank you
At 66 pages, you are not…
At 66 pages, you are not within a standard screenplay length. Try making it a movie of the week, not a feature.
Thank you Robin.
Thank you Robin.