The Ghost of the Roast Hog

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Logline or Premise
After a beloved butcher is found brutally murdered after the village Hog Roast, a trainee detective completely out of his depth and his equally incompetent assistant must be the ones to help the villagers of Lower Strangling and find the killer before they strike again.
First 10 Pages

First ten pages enclosed as a PDF.

Comments

Stewart Carry Wed, 17/07/2024 - 17:12

Some of the humour is a bit predictable at times. Try to make the dialogue more pacey and cut back on descriptive detail in the action lines. Another edit is recommended.

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