Ruby Tuesday

Screenplay Type
Genre
2025 Young Or Golden Writer
Logline or Premise
When hope is gone and there is no one left to turn to, find Ruby Tuesday, a woman who has patiently waited fifteen years for her revenge.

Comments

Stewart Carry Wed, 23/04/2025 - 16:48

A great set-up and hook to grab our attention. The dialogue is on point and reveals the characters as they are. The pacing is perfect and builds up to the scene in the alleyway when Ruby breaks the thug's wrist. The pace slows down as we enter the meeting but we feel that this is the real inciting incident. A great excerpt.

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