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2025 Young Or Golden Writer
Logline or Premise
In 1970s Manhattan, ambitious young Black professionals strive to create a safe, vibrant nightlife haven, battling systemic racism, betrayal, and personal sacrifices to succeed.
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The premise is not entirely…
The premise is not entirely clear despite the dramatic opening. The dialogue 'sounds' a bit too formal and high register given the locations and the characters. I don't really understand the need for the 'mouse episode' and how that contributes to the development of the narrative. Another edit would polish this up a lot.