Following his father's funeral, Stewart, a divorced and burnt-out corporate accountant, discovers a 45-year-old travel journal detailing a meticulously planned, never-taken itinerary to Thailand. Desperate to escape the crushing routine of his life and honor his late father's memory, Stewart abruptly abandons his demanding career to retrace those exact steps.
As he journeys through the vibrant country, Stewart forces himself to step outside his comfort zone, confronting a persistent, worsening chronic cough that he continuously brushes aside as mere exhaustion. What begins as a dutiful tribute to his father transforms into a profound, soul-searching awakening, ultimately forcing Stewart to re-examine how he values his time and what it truly means to live in the moment.
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It's a great premise and a…
It's a great premise and a powerful hook to draw the reader into the story. I'm a bit concerned about the pacing, especially in the first half of the script up to when he discovers the itinerary. It skims along like a shooting script and it feels at the expense of allowing the characters more time to establish themselves and their voices.
Thank you for the read and…
Thank you for the read and the notes. This is my first screenplay so I am still learning. Your input is greatly appreciated.
I love the ending. Starting…
I love the ending. Starting a movie at a funeral is challenging. Look at the history of movies that begin in a funeral. It's a thing.
Thanks, Robin — really…
Thanks, Robin — really appreciate you reading it and especially glad the ending landed for you. The funeral opening was definitely something I debated, so that means a lot.