Raven's Wing

Not enough, really, to judge on. From what I read, it's a decent start. :)

The premise, the set-up, the conflict within and without are blended together so well that the character drives the action, just as it should happen. To complement this, the sparse use of dialogue, the clipped sentences and the attention to physical detail create just the right mood and atmosphere to make Heather's world one of despair and desperation that is palpable.