Cold Dead Fingers

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Logline or Premise
A good man breaks away from an unholy group of desperados only to find himself defending an entire town from the undead monsters that he helped unleash.
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Compelling Characters
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Quality of Writing
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Storyline Potential
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Comments

Stewart Carry Wed, 24/07/2024 - 12:23

Despite the popular premise of the undead, the initial set-up hooks us in but it's not long before the rising tension begins to dissipate as the bar-room dialogue becomes long drawn out and predictable. More needs to be done to keep the reader engaged and ensure that this familiar theme has something unique to offer.

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