Screenplay Type
Screenplay Award Sub-Category
Genre
2024 Young Or Golden Writer
Logline or Premise
When a disavowed CIA operative living in “Magnum-era” Honolulu is brought up on 94 fraud charges, he’s paired with a rookie Public
Defender to prove his innocence, but the Court disallows all “classified” evidence that might clear his name.
Defender to prove his innocence, but the Court disallows all “classified” evidence that might clear his name.
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Comments
I think the reference to …
I think the reference to 'Magnum' in the logline is a bit unfortunate. Besides that, it's quite well-written although to begin with a dream sequence may not be the most effective hook for the reader. Regarding structure, avoid multiple flashbacks unless they are absolutely necessary to the narrative progression.