Glorious Amateurs #1 - Saddle Up

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2024 Young Or Golden Writer
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Stewart Carry Sat, 03/08/2024 - 10:24

The unexpected, action-packed opening is a great hook to engage the reader. Well-paced, effective structure enables us to get a good grip on the main personalities involved in the set-up and leads perfectly into the Pearl Harbour inciting incident. This is what we've been waiting for. A few minor language and dialogue tweaks to give it one final polish.

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